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Legend of The Alicorn- Prologue"Get Down!" a voice screamed, raised above the sounds of of explosions and yells. "more are coming!" A small figure ducked down behind some bushes, blasts of magic blazing past her. She looked up at another figure. the figure of a unicorn. he was towering protectively over her, his horn lit up with a dim aura. "River!" he said with firm confidence "River Frost, are you alright?" River Frost looked up at him "yes, i am but i-" her shaky voice was interrupted by a lean figure landing beside her, it was one of the things that sent the ponies of the land into battle. The creature reared up to look at river frost. "issa found you, young princessssssa" it hissed with a stone cold voice. Suddenly, the creature was send flying sideways by a beam of magic from the larger figure's horn. "River, listen to me, we have but no time left, these creatures are winning against us" He Exclaimed. "you need to escape! its you they want!" "b-b-but.... we cant be losing! we-" she was cut off by larger unicor